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Is this a good trailer
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No
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I dont know
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Maybe
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Terrible, u really need lessons
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jakechief
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PostSubject: Cheyenne Trailer out now   Cheyenne Trailer out now I_icon_minitimeTue Mar 10, 2009 4:58 pm

http://www.tmunderground.com/watch/514baec129f72948c266/Cheyenne-Trailer



My new trailer for "Cheyenne" is out now. Please let me know what u think! sniper
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PostSubject: Re: Cheyenne Trailer out now   Cheyenne Trailer out now I_icon_minitimeTue Mar 10, 2009 8:54 pm

I don't mean to sound like a jerk or anything, but that trailer wasn't good man, I could barely understand what was being said, and the actors lines were too cheesy: I saw some guys with masks and guns down the street...It was scary.

That doesn't sound realistic: I'm a little freaked out right now because I just think I saw some terrorists walking down the streets, they wore masks and had guns and everything....

That sounds a little more realitstic, please try to work on your script speech otherwise your film will sound like the new version of Charlie Brown: Oh-no! Linus! Go. To. The. Beach. And. Get. Charlie. Brown! lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Cheyenne Trailer out now   Cheyenne Trailer out now I_icon_minitimeWed Mar 11, 2009 9:37 am

Hard to say. The piano is way too loud we don't understand anything when the guy speak. The green screen? The camera going through building?

Sure the dialogue could use some more work, but to be honest, most of the movies I've seen (made with The Movies) have cheesy dialogs.

@werecool, your line doesn't sound better by the way. I think this type of things doesn't need to be said, it needs to be seen.
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PostSubject: Re: Cheyenne Trailer out now   Cheyenne Trailer out now I_icon_minitimeWed Mar 18, 2009 2:50 pm

This would be better thought.....
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